T he Woman gets in trouble with subject register problem. She needed to listen economic class for graduation, but it’s already fill up. So, she can’t take economic class.Then the man suggests to take economic class in summer period. Because when summer, it is good time to go school and it also not fill up. But, the woman have to work in restaurant in summer, six days per week. So, she can’t take summer class.So, the man suggests her to take community college. Community college used to in night class, but it contains economic class. And night class is perfect time for her to listen. I think she rather take the community college. Because of she can’t listen economic class in summer. But, in community college she can listen.
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Jae-Hyoung,
Overall Score: 2
This one, even more than others has grammar issues, so much so that it makes understanding what you are trying to say, very difficult. Again, your issue is a long term one since improving grammar is not a short term solution but rather takes years of practice and work. Still, I have corrected your grammar issues below and I hope that it helps you. :)
The Woman is having a problem trying to register for an economics class. She needed to take an economic class in order to graduate, but it’s already full. So, she can’t take the economics class.Then the man suggests to take the economics class during the summer. Because during the summer session, it is good time to go school and the class isn't yet full. But, the woman has to work in a restaurant in the summer, six days per week. So, she can’t take summer classes.So, the man suggests to her to take the class at a community college. Community college used to in night class, but it contains economic class. ( I can't understand this part)And night class is perfect time for her to attend. I think she should take the class at the community college. Because, while she can’t take the economics class in summer at her school, she can take it at the community college.
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