Thursday, November 13, 2008

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I love to dress on formal style clothes.
Because they make me look clean than other clothes.
Suit or neat are often used to make people look better.
And It works even though they are ugly person.
I think maintaining clean style is very important part of our life.
Another reason is, fact that formal style clothes hold me straight.
Being in straight attitude is essential part of nice look.
Some clothes that fit on body tense me and make me look faithful.
Costume influence on how people look like.
So, for these reasons, I prefer to wearing in formal style.


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I love to dress in formal style clothes.
I feel this way because they make me look cleaner than when I wear other clothes.
Suits are often used to make people look better.
And It works even when ugly people wear them.
I think maintaining a clean style is a very important part of our life.
Another reason I like wearing formal clothes is because when I wear them I notice that my posture improves.
Keeping my back straight helps me maintain an attitude that is an essential part of a nice look.
Additionally, formal clothes that fit tightly on are, in my opinion a sign of respect for society.
How we dress influences how people see us.
So, for these reasons, I prefer to wear formal style clothes.

1 comment:

eLearning said...

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Grammar and word choice corrections follow:

I love to dress in formal style clothes.
I feel this way because they make me look cleaner than when I wear other clothes.
Suits are often used to make people look better.
And It works even when ugly people wear them.
I think maintaining a clean style is a very important part of our life.
Another reason I like wearing formal clothes is because when I wear them I notice that my posture improves.
Keeping my back straight helps me maintain an attitude that is an essential part of a nice look.

Additionally, formal clothes that fit tightly on are, in my opinion a sign of respect for society.
How we dress influences how people see us.
So, for these reasons, I prefer to wear formal style clothes.