Another reason is foods that made in home is more fresh and healthy. Restaurant food is delicious, but, most of restaurant food contains salty and high cholesterol ingredient. So, it is not good for health.
Wednesday, November 5, 2008
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Another reason is foods that made in home is more fresh and healthy. Restaurant food is delicious, but, most of restaurant food contains salty and high cholesterol ingredient. So, it is not good for health.
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Jae-Hyoung,
Overall score: 2(maybe 3)
Some pronunciation issues here (prefer and health)Overall, your delivery is good though. There are some issues grammatically at the phrasal level. Please see corrections below.
I prefer to make my own meals at home. This is because I can choose whatever food I want. In the case of going out to a restaurant, by choice is limited by the menu, and if I want another food, I have to walk around to search for another restaurant.
Another reason is foods that are made at home are more fresh and healthy. Restaurant food is delicious, but, most f restaurant food contains salty and high cholesterol ingredients. So, it is not good for health.
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